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Let Me Taste It !

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Posted at 2015-05-20 10:12:10

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Im laying in bed not wanting to attend school today . I was actually tired of seeing all those fake ass people you call " Friends " . But of course we all have that 1 gurdian who always MAKES us go . Like NOW !

Momma- CORNELL TAYLOR !!!!

I laid there and tried to act as if i was sick . ( Bang )

Nell- yes ma ...

Momma- boy get ya ass up you aint sick . Come on cause i have to bring your lil sisters to day care .

Nell- ight ight ... ( gets up )

Momma- nice doing buisness with you . Food is down stairs love you Nell Nell muah !

After she closed the door i went into my closet and sat on the floor . Hmm what should i wear . I mean i can careless about today so i guess ill wear my bball shorts . A white tee and some jordans . FUCK IT .

I walked over into my bathroom and stared into the mirror at myself . I had nice thick eye brows that i get done from time to time . Full pink lips to go with my caramel skin complexion and my light brown eyes . My eye lashes since i came out the twat always looked like a girls . They went upward . Dont you hate when you see guys with window shades as eye lashes ... ... ... nahh let me stop !

My body is very atheltic body and is thick in certain places . After looking at myself i started to put on my facial cause i love my skin nice and clean . :) then i jumped my ass in the shower and washed my self until i heard my phone vibrating continously i tried to ignore it but it kept going so i turned off the water put the towel around me and checked my phone .

( Sits on the bed )

2 missed calls from Amiya
2 Text from Amiya
1 from Tyrell

Amiya- but bitchhhh you coming today ?
Amiya- i know your funky ass reading my text .
Nell- ... No im staying home
Amiya- you wack fr tho !
Nell- you wack fr tho !
Amiya- Me and Tyrell was gonna come get you .
Nell- yall aggy asses . Ight what time ?
Amiya- now!! we down the street hurry up . I want mcdonalds bitch .
Nell- listen bitch stop calling me a bitch .
Amiya- ight ho . Hurrup !!!

Ughh! Her non speaking english ass . I got up and started lotioning my whole body . I took off my durag and checked to see if my waves was right . Then i put my clothes on and got me a random snapback and put it on .

I ran downstairs in the kitchen took me some bacon eggs and 1 sausage and put it in a croissant and started chowing down .

Momma- ( coming down the stairs ) it aint going nowhere .

Nell- i know but Amiya is coming to get me .

Momma- you need to get your license you got the permit already and you 17 . You know your dad will get you a car.

Nell- where he at anyways ? Upstairs sleep ?

Momma- yeah i put it onem !!! Something deadly . He knocked boyyy .

( Beep! )

Nell- seee you nastyyy im glad i ate most of my sandwich . Bye momma !

Momma- byeeee muah !

I walked outside and Amiyas dumb asses kept beeping the horn to the song that was playing in the car . I think it was BangBang by Jessie j Ariana Grande and Nicki . I got in the back shaking my head .

Nell- STOP ! Before my momma come out and drag that ass .

Amiya-oh yeahhh let me quit .

Nell- ( pulls on 1 of Tyrells braids ) well damn nigga wassup ?

Tyrell- chill i aint in the mood .

Amiya- Cornell leave him he wont tell me whats wrong .

Nell- okay ?

The whole ride there we was quiet so i decided to take a pic and post it on Instagram . After i posted it i was scrolling through my feeds . And all i see is weed, ass, people twerking, niggas bodies, gang signs, funny ass pictures, and all that good stuff . Then i saw 1 pic of Isaiah ... This dude ! . I leaned forward and showed Amiya the pic and she made a face .

Amiya- like why do you like him thoughhhh . He dont seem like your type . Hes all like kind of geeky but cool but weird . He be chillin with the those asians lol .

Nell- shut up i got a chinese friend so what . Aint nothing wrong with him . And i dont like him its just idk why he makes a nigga think about him .

Amiya- its weird though !

Nell- lol i know i know .

Amiya- ( Turning into Mcdonalds ) But Tey though ........ Mmmm !

Nell- oh shut up . ( looks up from my phone ) .. damn mad heads here .

Amiya- as always . Lets see who in here .

Me and Amiya got out and Tyrell sat in the car on his phone . I turned back and went to his window .

Nell- you want something ?

Tyrell- uhhmmm .

Nell- bacon egg and cheese on a mcgriddle .

Tyrell- yeah and a hashbrown .

Nell- ight ho . Cheer up too ( walks away )

When i got inside Amiyas ass was already over there near Tey acting a fool . I just walked my ass in line .

Amiah- ( coming up behind Nell humping him ) mmm what that ass do boo .

Nell- yoooo i cant even laugh . Dumb ass . You crazy !

Amiya- but look Tey was just telling me that him and the basketball players and a few of the football team are skippin and going to the beach .

Nell- annnnnnDa .

Amiya- im going ... You coming ? Say yes !

Nell- yeah ill go . Didnt want to go to school today noway .

Amiya- YES ! Okay okay let me tell him . ( walks away )

I ordered Tyrells food and got me a caramel frappe . When i was waiting for my food . I saw Isaiah walk in with his sister . My heart jumped like a dumbass . And as always like my creep self i checked to see if he was bulging today . And yes he was , i mean it wasnt like some big ol bulge . But it was a damn good looking bulge . Ughhh ight chill let me stop . Im weird and he might catch me ( SLAP )

People- OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH!

I grabbed my neck quickly and turned around to see this dumb ass Leo laughing it up dapping up his boys . I mean its nothing . He always does that shit cause they always like to see me react but not today . I just turned and i caught Isaiah looking at me and he looked like he just finished laughing at me . I turned away and shook my head . NOW i feel embarrassed .

I got the food and started walking out . And here he goes .

Leo- awwww Nelly mad now !

Nell- nigga i aint mad ill get you back and you know it ( walks out )

When i got in the car i handed Tyrell his food and started drinking my frappe .

Tyrell- yall was loud in there .

Nell- nah it was Leo he slapped my neck .

Tyrell- ahhh his dumbass .

Nell- right ! Did you hear about how his girl might be pregnant ?

Tyrell- yeahhhhh i heard . Damn shame he better hope she aint . She madd annoying .

Nell- right . You going to the beach with us ?

Tyrell- nah im actually gonna take a ride with Isaiah to school i got 2 test .

Nell- oh you know him ?

Tyrell- yeah haha . You dont ?

Nell- not like that i only seen him in my class last year . Thats it

Tyrell- and you like him ?

Nell- NO! I just like looking at him damn ...

Tyrell- alright nigga damn i get it .

Nell- mhm .

------ BEACH

Me and Amiya parked next to Teys truck packed with them ignorant ass niggas .

When i got out so did Tey and he streched and was looking at me i can tell cause i can see him from the corner of my eye . I was starting to walk to Amiyas side until he said .

Tey- ( hands up in the air stretching ) damn when did you become to good to speak to niggas yo ?

Nell- my bad ( daps him )

Tey- yea yea .

I walked over to Amiya who was fixing her hair in the mirror .

Nell- just come on you good !

Amiya- i look good ? Or GOOD GOOD !

Nell- good goo ....

Amiya- you aint shit ! You just mad .

Nell- mhm .

She finally got out the car after they already filed there asses down on the beach me and Amiya was in back of them . Then it hit me ... I saw Leo laughing it up with his boys . So i told Amiya to hold my Frappe and i took off my jordans and Ran upbehind him jumped up and slapped the shit out of his neck that they all jumped .

Amiya- OOOOOOOOHHHH !

Boys- ( cracking up ) damnn !! Bruh he got you .

Leo- ( rubbing his neck ) hell nah nigga come here .

Nell- chill ! ( backing up )

I seen that Leo was catching speed . So i started running and they all was cheering him on . As i was running i could feel him near me so i turned and ended up crossing him up . And he caught himself with his hands in the sand .

Crew- OHHHHHHH !!!! Damnnnn !! He crossed your ass up yo ! VIOLATED SON !

I walked back over and helped him up .

Leo- oh you trying to embarrass me now ?

Nell- payback is a bitch huh ?

Leo- ight so you think this is a game ?

Nell- nahhh not at all ( starts walking back )

Leo- ill fuck you up . ( walking behind Nell )

Nell- why you so mad ?

Leo- ( pushes Nells head hard as shit ) cause i dont like that shit .

Nell- ( trips ) yo its not that serious . Get out your feelings nigga . Get over it .

Leo- what nigga ? ( steps right in front of Nell looking down at him ) Wassup nigga you dont want this .

Nell- nigga i dont give a fuck how big you are . Get from in my face .

( hears everyone jogging over talking )

Amiya- you better not touch him Leo ! I swear . Get yall friend !

Crew- ( stands there ) nah

Amiya- fuck yall . ( comes over to Nell ) come on Cornell fuck him .

Nell- ( Amiyah turning cornell around walking away ) fucking bitch .

Then i felt Leo put me into a choke hold . But it wasnt that tight to put me to sleep just to scare me . I had my hands on his arm trying to pull him off . And Everyone was quiet but Amiya . She kept yelling at him hitting him but then 1 of the boys grabbed her away . Leo continued to have me in that hold . We started walking . And he was talking mad shit . When we was walking i felt his dick imprint on my ass .

Leo- ( tightening his grip ) fuck with me again nigga .

Nell- man let me go .

Leo- nah you want to be funny huh ?

Nell- come on i cant breath ! You play to much .

Leo- shut up - (tightening it )

Nell- if you keep on tightening your grip imma tell them niggas your dick got hard .

Then Leo realised that his dick was actually hard then he let go a little but we ended up walking into the water so they wouldnt see . After he let me go everyone was laughing at Amiya .

Amiya- nahhh fuck that . He play too much ! And bitch ( hits the boy who grabbed her ) touch me again !

While we was in the water half way Leo walked away from me a little and said .

Leo- dont say shit forreal . I dont know how that shit happened . I aint with that ,

Nell- chill im not . Promise to stop smacking me .

Leo- ight cool you got it .

I walked out the water and i went over to Amiya and i heard 1 of the dudes say Oh shit under his breath . I turned and he was staring at my ass but i turned away before he knew i was looking .

Amiya- yup he was staring . I knew some of them was on that tip . You okay boo ?

Nell- im good . Gotta tell you something though .

Tey- ( puts arm around Nells neck ) where you learn how to cross niggas up like that .

Nell- i play ball . Just at home with fam .

Tey- you prob good . Stop playing and get with the crew man .

Nell- nahhh .

Tey- ( stands straight up ) damnn well ight think about it .

Nell- mhm . ( Tey walks away )

Amiya- mmmmmmm ( jumps ) i want him . Dont be all on him either bitch .

Nell- thats him not me .

Amiya- why cant he just fall inside me . HAHAAAAAAA !

Nell- i cantttttttt !

Amiya- im dead ass seri... Oh my gosh !!!! Nell look ( turns him )

Nell- shitttt ... My day has gotten worse .

Amiya- and he with his wack ass BM. He is cute but damn you had to choose his thug ass . How old is he again . ?

Nell- 22.

Amiya- and you 17

Nell- sooo . Ugh come on i dont want him to start the bull .

Amiya- too late bitch too late he keep looking over squinting with his sexy ass .

I looked over at my Ex Demitri . Damn was i in love with his ass . My first everything of course . Hes 6'2 Dark skinned . He had on no shirt his whole body was tatted . He had in dreads now which i think looks better on him . Dark brown eyes . And full lips . Damn and his muscles was just out there ... Fuckkk -_- .

( Phone Vibrates )

Text from Demitri

Demitri- is that you Nello?
Nell- ( smiled and shaked my head @Nello ) yeah ...
Demitri- FUCK !
Nell- what ?
Demitri- nothin nothin .
Nell- okay ?

I put my phone away cause thats what he did . I mean what did i do ?

Amiya- was that him ?

Nell- yeahhh but he asked was it me i said yea then hes like FUCK ! . So idk

Amiya- he probably shocked that you look even sexier now ha .

Nell- nah hes the 1 ... Haha let me quit.

Amiya- mhmmm !

Tey- AYE YALL !! Lets play volley ball .

Amiya- you do NOT want it with us .

Nell- right .

Tey- yeah i know Volley ball is for girls .

Nell- nigga ...

Tey- im just fucking with yall . But Me and Leo against yall two .

Nell- ight .

As we was getting in our positions Amiya whispered to me . "Let them get the first 4 . Then lets tear dat ass up ! Shreds bitch " ... I could do nothing but laugh .

After we gave them about 3 wins . And saw how much shit they was talking . Amiya turned and said, " Fuck it ! ".

After she said that i served and Leo hit it up and Tey went to finish it but Amiya jumped up and scored 1 for us and Leo turned and looked at his boys . Tey smiled at Amiya and she flipped her hair and said, " Yasssss " . After we scored about 4 more straight . Leo threw the ball up and walked away .

Tey- ahhhh dont be a fuck boy !

Leo- nah they cheating . I bet they cant beat us in basketball though .

Amiya- you real mad Leo ?

Leo- ( ignores )

Nell- i mean im good at bball too . Fuck with me .

Tey- oh nah lil fella chill out we dont want you quitting like ol Leo .

Leo- man shut the fuck up .

Tey- ight but forreal though . Yall tryna chill with us at the crib . We got L .

Nell- hell yeah .

Amiya- im on a diet .

Nell- ( falls in the sand ) HAHAAAA!!!

Tey- DEAD girl come on .

--- Leos House

As we was walking in the house I heard Leo on his phone arguing with someone then shaking his head .

Nell- whats wrong ?

Leo- why you worried ? Shit

Nell- ight ... ( walking inside )

Leo- my girl wants to swing through and i dont feel like being bothered .

Nell- having problems ?

Leo- dont act like you havent heard .

Nell- is it true ?

Leo- man idk . Some people saying she just wants to be pregnant to get my money if i make it .

Nell- i wouldnt put it past her ass . Never liked that ...

Leo- aye watch it .

Nell- yea yea i know . ( walks inside )

Tey- ill order some food . Chinese or pizza ?

All- CHINESE !

I went and sat down near Tey and Amiya and went through my phone had a missed text from Demitri .

Text Message :

Demitri- we need to talk ...
Nell- for ?
Demitri- dont ask questions .
Nell- Demi im busy .
Demitri- honestly i can careless . I need to see you .
Nell- for what !?
Demitri- i miss you shit ...

When i saw that my heart started beating fast and i put my phone away . I wasnt about to let that game get into my head . Cause i know he just wants me on the side and keep his lies piling up . He thinks im going to sit there and let him fuck me while he got his family on the side . Fuck that .

Tey- CORNELL ! Son snap out of it .

Amiya- what are you thinking about you looking all pitiful ?

Nell- oh nah just was thinking bout something .

Amiya- no shit but of what ?

Nell- tell you later .

Amiya- text me .

Nell- nahhh laterrrrr .

Tey- we got secrets now ? ( looks at both of us )

Nell- maybe

Oh i didnt explain how Tey looked huh ? Well hes the tallest out of the whole team 6'5 hes slim but got some muscle he got 1 side of his body tatted . Hes light skin like LIGHT with pink ass lips . I think hes black and white . He has dark grey eyes and short curly hair .

Leo is 6'3 hes brown skin hes tatted all over his body . Hes more muscular than Tey and i think more cuter but leave it up to AMIYA -_- ... Leo has a fade with the sexiest full lips even better than Demitris ........ His walk is soooo " im that nigga " type shit .

Tey- ight ight ... Secrets it is . But YO ! ( his crew ) we need to invite more ladies . School should be out soon .

Amiya looked at me and rolled her eyes .

About 45 minutes later the ladies he wanted arrived and so did that bitch Dasia , Leos girl friend . When she walked inside just looked at her and she smiled at me and Amiya on some fake shit and i just looked away . And she knows exactly why i did . Cause yes shes the reason Demitri and i are not together . Just a damn crusty crab ho .

Amiya-( scoots next to me ) i swear i wanna bop her ass .

Nell- thats for another day she might be with child .

Amiya- more like she might be with demon . And look at all these heffas coming in here . I kind of want to get out of here . Take me a damn togo mutha fuckin plate .

Nell- same . Let me go pee first and make me a plate .

Amiya- ight .

I went upstairs into the bathroom and took my piss . As i was peeing i heard yelling and things being thrown around . I quickly zipped up washed my hands and went into the hallway and crept my way over to the door to listen .

Leo- chill out man your ass just got here and you asking about Amiya yo . She aint checking for me the fuck you always worried for .

Dasia- i dont give a fuck Leo ( throws something ) i dont want them two around !

Leo- you killin me right now . Stop talking and keep throwin my shit and watch .

Then i heard like 3 smacks . I opened the door and Dasia was hitting on Leo and he pushed her on the bed about to hit her and i ran and grabbed pushed him agaist the wall .

Leo- nah fuck that get out my house !

Dasia- so you was gonna hit me ? Huh Leo ? And i got your baby !

Leo- GET OUT ! ( pushes Nell hand off of him )

Dasia- fuck you Leo and your lil save a ho . ( walks out )

I turned to Leo about to ask him is he alright but he was picking stuff off the floor so i just turned and started walking out . When i was approaching the door he ran up and closed the door .

Leo- why did you do that ?

Nell- do what ?

Leo- hold me back .

Nell- um just like any true friend would do . I mean your a basketball player people look up to you . And you dont want that on your record . I dont see why you put up with this .

Leo- i dont either ...

Nell- well im about to leave so can i go now ?

Leo- yea yea ( opens the door )

Nell- see you tomorrow ( daps him )

Leo- ight and thanks .

Nell- you good . And stop staring at me like that .

Leo- like what ?

Nell- like your lost .

Leo- ( pulls Nell back in and closes the door ) let me see .

Leo bent down and kissed my lips softly and held it then he slowly put his tongue in my mouth and i moved my face .

Nell- aye what was that . ( opening the door ) .

Leo- i..i.. ( steps back and puts his hands on his head )

I just turned and closed his door and walked back downstairs and Amiya was waiting at the door . I grabbed her arm and we left out . But Tey ran outside .

Tey- aye why yall leaving ?

Amiya- I dont feel good .

Tey- well can i get your number ?

Amiya- yeah ( gives him the number )

Tey- cool ill call you later .

Amiya- ight :) .

On our way to my house i was telling Amiya about Demitri and Leo .

Nell- Demitri talking about he miss me . I didnt even respond .

Amiya- good cause all his sexy chocolate ass wants is some of you .

Nell- well you make things better i see :) .

Amiya- ikr !

Nell- how about Leo kissed me .

Amiya- ( slams on her breaks ) WHAT !!!!!!? Leo Leo ???

Nell- yea ... It was wierd for me . But then it wasnt i dont know .

Amiya- oh my gosh ! ( starts driving again ) yall cute though i was watching how he looks at you .

Nell- like he lost !

Amiya- noooo like he want you . Idk if its sexual or not . But mhmmmmm . Nelly got him a new penis .

Nell- chill no i dont .

When we was pulling up to my house i saw Demitris car waiting outside and i threw my head back . I got out the car with Amiya and walked towards my door . Then i hear a car door close .

Demitri- so yall gonna act like yall dont see me there .?

Nell- ( doesnt turn around and opens the door Amiya goes inside )

Demitri- ( turns Nell around ) why cant you look at me ?

Nell- ( looks down the street ) cause man what do you want ...

He really wants to know why ??? Cause hes fucking sexy and i know i will fall for his shit !!

Demitri- take a ride with me .

Nell- i have company ( noticing Demitri has his dreads down ) mm

Demitri- ughhh yo come on .

Nell- listen ill talk to you later ( turns around )

Demitri- ( walks behind Nell and puts his arm around him and talks into his ear ) do you know how much i thought about what i did to you ?

All i could do was stand there and smell how good his hair smelled and him . But i had to stay on track so i moved his arm and walked inside and closed the door . Then i had a lil tantrum cause my dick was hard as shit and i wanted him !

Demitri- ( banging on the door ) Nello come on please .

Nell-( stands there )

Demitri- imma call you ! And you better answer !

I looked through the shades and i thought he was walking off but he was still standing there looking at me and winked then walked off with his sweats saggin digging in his pocket for his keys .

Amiya- BITCH ! Snap out of it !

Nell- ( jumps ) really !

Amiya- ( eating a chicken finger ) CHICKEN FINNNNGAAA GEWD!

Nell- this is going to be a long night .


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Chapters :


1 .Let Me Taste It !
2 .Double Date ?
3 .Can i Trust you ?
4 .FACETIME !
5 .Party Time ! Or Revenge Time ?
6 .Party Time Part 2 !!
7 .Are you Ready ?
8 .There is No Trust !
9 .I'm back !!!
10 .Miami ! Part 1
11 .Miami ! Part 2
12 .Miami ! Part 3
13 .Home Sweet Home ?
14 .Block ?
15 .Cabin Party !
16 .Tastes Good !
17 .Time to Spice it up !
18 .Things Can Change !
19 .The Hospital & Gifts !
20 .Damn Momma !
21 .Drama Thanksgiving !
22 .Surprise !
23 .Pain & Secrets
24 .Do You ?
25 .Rewarded Suspension ?
26 .Miami Again !
27 .LEO NO !?
28 .Surprises !
29 .Still In Love ?
30 .I Want my Brother Back !
31 .Why Tey !?
32 .The Necklace !
33 .Rula Rula Rula !
34 .Still Nervous ?
35 .Why are you here ?
36 .Leo CHILL OUT !
37 .Stop Fucking Up !

 

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So.....your not going to finish. ...????
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- Fr I'm Thirsty Lol
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More chapters please
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Team rula da fuk u mean😎
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THIS IS GOOD..WAS VERY CAPTIVATING..IT DREW ME IN AND I COULDN'T STOP READING! :D
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when are you gonna write some chapters
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This story is really good, but it has an extremely biased slant. Nell play a lot of games, yet he is constantly made to be the victim. He is not stupid nor is he naive. Examples...1) Why would you think that it's okay to invite a guy who clearly likes you on a vacation with you and your boyfriend, that's paid for by your boyfriend? 2)Why would you work for a man that you can immediately tells likes you? 3) If you're all about honesty, why won't you tell Rula about your recent conversation with your new boss, and the fact that he is calling you discussing personal business after only meeting you a few hours prior?

Be fair in this story and call Nell out on his bs, like you do everyone else.
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Post Posted: 2016-09-07 23:25:41
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crunkcakes wrotes:
ive always been TeamLeo or TeamAdrian....Rula was never it for me he too bipolar
And Leo ISN'T bipolar?!!! He put his hands on Nell not once, not twice but numerous times. If Nell needs to stay away from anybody, it's that one there. I think he needs to leave Rula alone for that same reason. It should have taken one time from either of them. I think Nell is playing too many head games with everyone but I'd rather ANYBODY over Leo for him!!!
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drama drama drama
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Post Posted: 2016-09-07 20:52:23
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ive always been TeamLeo or TeamAdrian....Rula was never it for me he too bipolar
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This story doesn't have the sane flare anymore... Rula on some bullshit I see although I've never really cared for him...TeamLeo all day!!!
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Please dont tell me something happened to Leo
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Great chapter..
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I'm glad to see that you're back and finishing up the story but I keep wondering why you bring Leo and nail together and then all of a sudden they stop fighting is there a reason why you don't have them come together I want to see them more than just friends and fighting and Leo likes him I love him then let it be don't let it be done this bac this back-and-forth thing is killing me and I'm hating it I like the story but I want to see the story go in a way that it's fun so much drama in the story nobody is happy for very long and your story why is that I'm not trying to put out the negative but I just want to see Le I'm not trying to put out the negative but I just want to see Leon Nei I'm not trying to put out the negative but I just want to see Leon Neal get together
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Post Posted: 2016-09-03 22:40:08
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thafunnyjuan88


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I like and Respeck the teacher for doing that #rolemodel....Now can Leo & Nell either get together or get over themselves cause their whole back and forward is a bit exhausting
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Post Posted: 2016-09-02 02:37:25
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entice_11


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Leo is one crazy ass lol
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Post Posted: 2016-09-02 00:43:59
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southern_virgo


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Leo needs somebody to bust him upside his head and Nell needs to stop fucking with him altogether with his stupid ass! How many times does it take a nigga putting his hands on you before you say enough is enough! I don't care how much Leo "likes" him. If I was Nell he would know not to even THINK about putting his hands on me again. Take something and knock the fuck out of him! He'll get the picture REAL quick!!!
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Post Posted: 2016-09-02 00:32:35
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bottomd


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Ugh they are so frustrating
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Post Posted: 2016-09-01 20:17:33
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bigjer2010


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Nell gave Leo a chance he played with it Nell has some feelings for him but what does he think will happen if he keeps putting hands on him
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Post Posted: 2016-09-01 17:29:32
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humbleheart37


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I don't think Nell is giving off mixed signals. Leo on the other hand have a lot of anger. And he keeps putting his hands on Nell. Who would want to be with someone that constantly gets physical when in the heat of anger?
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Post Posted: 2016-09-01 15:20:52
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lil_kevin_b


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im reaally notstarting notvto like Cornell youbgige a guy mixed signals knowing he has feelings for then act dumb on why he's acting out
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Post Posted: 2016-09-01 14:47:53
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cakecakez


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ced_the_trucker wrotes:
Did this nigga just like leave us hanging for almost a year and come back like he wasn't gone. Hell I forgot who was who and he did what. The last was the end for me. I ain't going back to figure out who was who.
Okay , thanks for reading !
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Post Posted: 2016-09-01 09:20:40
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sexyblkbttmboii


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Glad you back. You left us hanging for a while.. Good chapter, can't wait for the next one..
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Post Posted: 2016-08-30 15:38:39
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ericuchia


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Glad your back man love this story, can't wait to see where it goes💯💯💯
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Post Posted: 2016-08-29 22:47:07
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freaky_trucker


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Did this nigga just like leave us hanging for almost a year and come back like he wasn't gone. Hell I forgot who was who and he did what. The last was the end for me. I ain't going back to figure out who was who.
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Post Posted: 2016-08-27 04:14:30
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sexypetts4u


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glad your back
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Post Posted: 2016-08-26 14:24:17
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geminitwin7


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Glad you back man love this story
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Post Posted: 2016-08-26 09:46:50
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bottomd


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Can you stop with the Leo and Nell back and forth just get them together
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Post Posted: 2016-08-26 04:56:42
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smartblackman


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Definitely glad that you're back...Great chapter.
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Post Posted: 2016-08-25 22:01:23
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thafunnyjuan88


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You came back stronger than ever. That damn Leo is still up to his ol tricks, he better wise up before it's too late mane
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Post Posted: 2016-08-25 12:45:31
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damos23


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Been waiting glad your back
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Post Posted: 2016-08-25 11:39:09
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lostlove16


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I'm glad you're back. But I'm still over all these niggas who don't know how to respect someone relationship
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Post Posted: 2016-08-04 13:15:28
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mr_immaculant


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damn i want him with leo, even tho he cant do what rula do for him, he shouldn't run away from tru love
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Post Posted: 2016-07-19 19:35:40
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letsget_down


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I have a relationship with this trade dude hes just like leo its scary yet confusing I don't know what to do. but this is a great story
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Post Posted: 2016-07-09 16:25:54
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jaydenjaymz


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Shit happens. It was early on in the relationship. Not like itwas a on going affair. Yeah Amiah coulda/shoulda said something but she knew how Nell felt about ole dude. Yeah Nell should be hella PISSED but eventually I think their friendship should survive.
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Post Posted: 2016-07-01 12:19:22
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cornry7


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Nell is starting to get on my nerves how nieve he is grow up man
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Post Posted: 2016-06-28 17:12:32
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cornry7


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Im team Rula # some people don't realize what they have til it gone
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Post Posted: 2016-06-28 15:38:49
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cornry7


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Im getting mad y nell keep let this nigga tell him they not together but in the same sentence say he better not mess with nobody else. He heard queen B say he better put a ring on it
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Post Posted: 2016-06-06 15:06:21
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sexceyred1


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We need the next chapter please
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Post Posted: 2016-05-12 16:01:38
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nlovewithlife


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She said go upstairs and think about the goodness of Jesus. LMAO, translation be glad I didn't just kill you.
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Post Posted: 2016-04-12 23:14:13
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soicey108


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I been team Rula.... He got money and he sweet. I'm glad Leo is out the picture now if only Nell can not feed into the temptation of these other lames.... Smh
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Post Posted: 2016-03-31 20:14:17
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supreme_jerre


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love this story
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Post Posted: 2016-03-29 23:11:10
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dick_me_down23


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Next chapter please
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Post Posted: 2016-03-21 14:39:04
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baesthetic


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I really like Rula but it seems to be everything happens every few chapters that's rula's fault or nell's I don't know if they really want to keep the relationship going or not at least it doesn't feel like they do. I do however like Nell and Leo together even though he started out as an asshole I like his character growth throughout the story.
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Post Posted: 2016-03-19 11:11:47
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dick_me_down23


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It didn't take me long to catch up in this story now that I have I want more great story next chapter please
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Post Posted: 2016-02-15 06:07:06
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sexyblkbttmboii


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Dope story.. I couldn't stop reading this story and can't get enough of it.. Keep it up
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Post Posted: 2016-02-12 11:28:58
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blacktruth4


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When are you going to post the next chapter?
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Post Posted: 2016-02-11 21:10:09
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just51


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I have read every chapter an I must say that I could not put it down. It was hard for me, but I must say I love it. And will be looking for more.. Peace
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Post Posted: 2016-02-09 18:03:10
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just51


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Something is very fishy about Rula . I believe that Leo would be the best person for Nell.
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Post Posted: 2016-02-08 18:36:36
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gr8d8


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Leo is gonna come up missing. Love the story.
 
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