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X dude - Part 12

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As X finally reach my apartment complex i feel like a chapter of my life is coming to an end.So i guess i see you around my dude,X speak to me all quiet as he pull up in front my building,then as im getting out the seatbelt he gra my arm before i can completely get out the car.

I like you mad crazy,and like i said dude dont just jump the gun and forget about a nigga,X speak to me one last time,i just nod my head ok in response.As im entering my apartment building i hear somebody beep from behind,then i turn and see X waving at me,that could be the last time i see him,thats life i guess.

I just wave back,and then head into the building,once im inside i turn my keys in the door as i go up inside my apartment,its just the way i left it.It felt good being home again,X had too much going on in his life anyway.I start putting my stuff up as i then hear somebody knocking on my door,im wondering who it is,especially so early in the morning,then as i look out the peephole aint nobody there?

I cracked my door open a little bit,peeping to see if somebody around the corner,but it wasnt nobody in sight,but then i look down and see a envelope right on my doormat,i just pick it up.As i take the envelope inside i close my door back as i put the locks on.

I give the envelope a glance,but then open it as i find a twenty dollar bill inside,followed by a receipt with handwriting on it.I start reading the receipt in my head.

Thanks dude,maybe one day i aint gotta be on a creep tip,told you i pay you back,for the black and mild,X,the tiny scribbling on the receipt read,i just smile in return.





The end




Chapters :


1 . X dude - Part 1
2 . X dude - Part 2
3 . X dude - Part 3
4 . X dude - Part 4
5 . X dude - Part 5
6 . X dude - Part 6
7 . X dude - Part 7
8 . X dude - Part 8
9 . X dude - Part 9
10 . X dude - Part 10
11 . Note from author
12 . X dude - Part 11
13 . X dude - Part 12

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Post Posted: 2017-04-14 09:17:14
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homealone


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Just when the story became interesting,it ended. This story could have having so many intreating plots all at the same time then coming to an unsuspecting climax. Great reading though. Maybe there is a part II.
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Post Posted: 2017-02-20 00:14:01
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louisruck


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Montez and X,the story is fiction but when I read it it felt real.
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Post Posted: 2016-08-04 06:41:17
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wetland


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This good but Montez need to MAN TF UP
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Post Posted: 2015-12-02 01:05:45
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killin_da_game


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wtf yo how u just gone end sum good like dat yo....? u gotta make a part two or sum
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Post Posted: 2015-11-30 23:15:02
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You ended this story too quick man. I hope you don't give up on this story. It has a lot content and room for growth in a few different areas.
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Post Posted: 2015-11-29 23:43:40
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Love the story wish there was a part two with longer and more chapters
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Post Posted: 2015-11-29 23:14:58
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I hope we get a part 2 this was a good story. X really was feeling the dude but he was not out. He might work it out with Stacy if she still there.
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Post Posted: 2015-11-29 22:55:57
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hacks


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That cant be the End!! omg,,, its just getting good
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Post Posted: 2015-11-29 22:44:54
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thuggluva


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Nooooooooooo! Don't end it. Too many loose ends. Pleaseeeeeeeee!
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Post Posted: 2015-11-29 19:37:02
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sonata


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love this story, more please.....lol
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Post Posted: 2015-11-29 17:07:07
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todo_eso


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Great story!!!!!!
 
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