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best0


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What's the point in really reading u don't completely any of your work
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southernsteel


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Dad is playing with his own damn mind...
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sonny1963


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I agree with darealme2014
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sonny1963


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I like the stories you use to write. You were detailed and thorough! Recently you start stories and immediately take them off even when you have positive and constructive comments! The gifted boys seem like a good story too. Don't rush it
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southernsteel


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I see you got another great one on your hands.... congrats!!!!
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thugboiwitswag


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did jacob and bronx get together
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Post Posted: 7 days ago
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southernsteel


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Nice story, toss some freaks over here before you ruin them with that anaconda. LOL
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kingsleepyhead


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I've never read a story about a polyamorous couple before. I am a bit surprised at the "roles". I would recommend keeping the spelling of the names consistent and proofreading a bit.
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kayden18


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Cant hardly wait to read it
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southernsteel


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These secret freaks are a total trip... get back on that dick. LOL
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southernsteel


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OOOH THAT WAS HOT, BUT TOO SHORT A SESSION!!!!
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southernsteel


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Ok do it...
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darkartist12


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Continue,would like to see where this goes.
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Post Posted: 10 days ago
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darkartist12


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Nice so far.
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medjaybayek


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southern_virgo wrotes:
Well damn! Mama is not playing games at all! I hope she is one of the good guys!
Oh yeah. She is not to be played with. But I have realized with most people that in real life it is sometimes hard to distinguish between the good and bad guys.
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Post Posted: 14 days ago
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medjaybayek


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southern_virgo wrotes:
Oh damn! This is something that's going to be too big! I'm not sure I'm supposed to go any further!
Enjoy the ride!!!!
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Post Posted: 15 days ago
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magicwuan


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Check out my book Twisted love the Rise of Sparta Mississippi on Amazon by Terrence Johnson
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thuggluva


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Awe shit. This is starting off with a shit load of drama. Next chapter please.
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Post Posted: 16 days ago
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southern_virgo wrotes:
This story is going at a nice pace but, sometimes, I can't tell the difference in dialogue between the characters. That is my only critique.

Maybe you can break it up a little so we can tell who is talking. I can barely tell when the dialogue has switched from Tiffany to Brandon to Rob.
I had two other people reading after I posted a chapter,they said they see when someone else's Dialogue but I'll have to read it again. You have to remember I don't have someone editing the chapters doing the best I can.

I guess it could be better if I had someone doing that, but I don't.
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Man I've been thinking all day about this story. From what I've read already, this would make a great screenplay. I've already cast three of the characters:

Of course, Jussie Smollet as Trey

Darryl Stephens - Ty

Eddie Cibrian - Mr. Lucas

Those are the actors I see in each one of those roles when I think of this story. What do you think?
That is an interesting mix. I actually like your choices. An Eddie Cibrian type is close to what I had in mind for Mr. Lucas.
Honestly, Eddie Cibrian and Joey Lawrence are the only two white men on the planet who can get it from me...LOL!!!
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Post Posted: 18 days ago
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Man I've been thinking all day about this story. From what I've read already, this would make a great screenplay. I've already cast three of the characters:

Of course, Jussie Smollet as Trey

Darryl Stephens - Ty

Eddie Cibrian - Mr. Lucas

Those are the actors I see in each one of those roles when I think of this story. What do you think?
That is an interesting mix. I actually like your choices. An Eddie Cibrian type is close to what I had in mind for Mr. Lucas.
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Man I've been thinking all day about this story. From what I've read already, this would make a great screenplay. I've already cast three of the characters:

Of course, Jussie Smollet as Trey

Darryl Stephens - Ty

Eddie Cibrian - Mr. Lucas

Those are the actors I see in each one of those roles when I think of this story. What do you think?
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Post Posted: 21 days ago
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REX baby U just jumped out of a frying pan and your about to land in the fire REX! baby...lol...I know a leopard cant change its spots and a zebra cant change his stripes...lmao...good luck with that one
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Post Posted: 21 days ago
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southernsteel


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Poor BA... Rex is a disaster waiting to happen. Maybe someone good will find him first Wishing you all the best!!!!
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Post Posted: 23 days ago
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medjaybayek


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dajee93 wrotes:
Wow i really like your story thumbs up good job
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
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Post Posted: 23 days ago
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medjaybayek


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sonny1963 wrotes:
Wow! This is gonna be a good story!
I really hope you enjoy it
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Post Posted: 23 days ago
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medjaybayek


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He works for the department of defense or something? I'm loving the secret room with the high-tech setup! And what does he have to tell Ceasar? I know it's going to be bad but I have faith that Ceasar is going to understand and stand by him. I can't wait to see what happens!!!
Thanks! You are the best!
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Post Posted: 24 days ago
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dajee93


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Wow i really like your story thumbs up good job
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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southern_virgo


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Yeah Otto. Why would you be worried? Seems to me like somebody has a crush!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜˜
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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justicepeace


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Excellent writing. When are you going to publish? : )
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Good Story So Far Man, Funny Characters, And An Intense Situation Right Out The Gate, At 1st I Was Thinking They Just BF & BF But But OMG Color Me Surprised By The Truth, Makes Me Wanna Yell At Their Parents Though (Marcus & Marquis) Seems Like Lazy/Confusing Naming To Me + You're Just Asking For That Shit That Happens When You Call One Of Them, The Other Shows Up Instead
Yeah this story is 90% true their actual names are Tino and Tony, I have not finished tino prison story because in real life he died ...But we can get into that later ...peace bro
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Post Posted: 28 days ago
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Out In The Backyard On A Hot Summer Day Suckin Off Ya Boy On The Stairs For The Pool But... "Keep It A Secret" LOL



Fyck, Dyck, SMH, WTF, Use Words Man
Hello so the origin of these words go back to when I first started writing on this site they censored everything and there was just@$#% or **** , and I believe that was taken away from my story, so to get around it I had to make all cuss words look like misspelling, I just add a y and FYCK you is now in my story but not censored... funny thing is if you go to Facebook or Twitter or even Instagram and you type in some of the wording that I use hear people started using them everywhere but they don't even know where they came from... I think shyt is the most popular outside of this site lmao if the world only new
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Post Posted: 28 days ago
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southernsteel


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Smooth moves so far, onward and forward. Delete that text, no repeats from the past.
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southernsteel


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Damn you had great fun i see. I would have slowed the motion and took you on an adventure, especially if it was your first. I would want us to cum together followed by a shower together. I can somewhat understand since he's married. That 3rd dimension sex is mind consuming and it's reserved a true couple in all aspects of a relationship. I got a feeling that one or both of you may get sprung!!!!!
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Post Posted: 29 days ago
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Good Story So Far Man, Funny Characters, And An Intense Situation Right Out The Gate, At 1st I Was Thinking They Just BF & BF But But OMG Color Me Surprised By The Truth, Makes Me Wanna Yell At Their Parents Though (Marcus & Marquis) Seems Like Lazy/Confusing Naming To Me + You're Just Asking For That Shit That Happens When You Call One Of Them, The Other Shows Up Instead
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Post Posted: 2018-05-18 04:51:26
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wood1984


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I'm loving the story man.
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Post Posted: 2018-05-18 04:51:05
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wood1984


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I'm loving the story man.
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Post Posted: 2018-05-17 21:04:01
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sonny1963


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Continue the story!
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Post Posted: 2018-05-17 15:38:50
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southernsteel wrotes:
Wow, I thought Eric had already did Nelson up already?????
I ended it to soon I want him to do a little more he'll get his though and someone else will die,
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Post Posted: 2018-05-17 15:37:06
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brothablack


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Nice
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Post Posted: 2018-05-17 12:02:18
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kirkmann


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great start man
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Post Posted: 2018-05-17 11:10:12
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kirkmann


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Great story man. Will you continue?
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Post Posted: 2018-05-17 05:16:32
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southernsteel


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Good story.... are you finishing it here or will you publish it?
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Post Posted: 2018-05-16 17:08:48
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dmoneydl


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More!!!!
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Post Posted: 2018-05-16 11:59:12
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1taius


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Next chapter I'll tell you what thes boys look like an how this all started
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Post Posted: 2018-05-16 07:26:55
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southernsteel


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You sound like a no bars held good freak...I bet that pissed rinsed that puzzy out. LOL
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Post Posted: 2018-05-16 06:47:59
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wow, next chapter!!!
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medjaybayek


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interesting story
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Post Posted: 2018-05-14 09:54:49
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southernsteel


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I can't stand Nelson and I hate Lassity for putting up with. Nothing turns me off faster than a weak person.
 
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