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valley0


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I enjoyed reading your story X-dude. It piqued my curiosity and I now have lots of questions.
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southern_virgo


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dajee93 wrotes:
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Lawd Kash just come on over to the dark side...LOL.

That damn Tina is the community pussy ain't she? Everybody has ridden that ride!

I think Kash needs to sit and have a talk with Kendall. He needs to get out of that lil' spoiled mindset and stand on his own two feet. I think Avant should put his foot down too. I felt some kind of way reading about him coming in the door and going right to cleaning up Kendall's room. He'll never grow up if they keep going like that.
Lol I guess I'm writing to slow,most of what you said is in my notes about both of them
My bad for giving it away...LOL!
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dajee93


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southern_virgo wrotes:
Lawd Kash just come on over to the dark side...LOL.

That damn Tina is the community pussy ain't she? Everybody has ridden that ride!

I think Kash needs to sit and have a talk with Kendall. He needs to get out of that lil' spoiled mindset and stand on his own two feet. I think Avant should put his foot down too. I felt some kind of way reading about him coming in the door and going right to cleaning up Kendall's room. He'll never grow up if they keep going like that.
Lol I guess I'm writing to slow,most of what you said is in my notes about both of them
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mrgood-wood


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This was poorly written and the whole story was pathetic. The writer could've used any character but instead used a sister and brother relationship who was broken by a no good husband. If anything it should've ended with Karrie and Keisha back on good terms like it was headed and Mycheal inconsiderate selfish ass being left alone. Not Keisha who was good to her husband and brother being the one left hurt like she deserved it and Mycheal and Karrie getting what they want at the end, when they both should've ended up alone 🙄
You still read it and left your own opinion on it punkass nigga thanks foe reading...
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Post Posted: 3 days ago
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dajee93


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chakatan_333 wrotes:
Bless his heart he really loves him, so sweet
I appreciate my readers,sometimes I see my story's as if I'm one of them I'd like to be Ekim .....lol... he's me Mike is Ekim that's were I got his name from
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boojie_clk


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southernsteel wrotes:
Nice start, nice see a power couple on top of things. Waiting a year and no sex. Wow that was positive wishing you two the best... I agree what you said about springing a child on you without full agreement.
Thank you much, now about the no sex thing, you know you actually do Decide to get married and you’ll have to go thur counseling the pastor or who ever is counseling you guys they will ask you to stop having sex until married.😘
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Post Posted: 5 days ago
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southernsteel


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Nice start, nice see a power couple on top of things. Waiting a year and no sex. Wow that was positive wishing you two the best... I agree what you said about springing a child on you without full agreement.
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hearmeroar


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Boring.
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Post Posted: 10 days ago
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dajee93


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chakatan_333 wrotes:
Oh Lawd I hope Carlos is alright and Lisa pulls through, shit maybe Romeo needs to get him a crystal ball and go into business and knock Mrs. Cleo out of business … lol
lol that's Romero I forgot I have two characters with the names sounding so much alike,Rom aka Romeo was Xavier's first dude, Romero is the husband but I get you.
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Post Posted: 10 days ago
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bigdp96


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Impressive
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writernigga


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steveman007 wrotes:
Pitful story
If it's pitiful than why the fuck you read it Bitch. Go on some where yo I hate lame ass niggas like you. But thanks for reading tho
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Post Posted: 13 days ago
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justin0


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beautiful story i can relate to
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nubianhere


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He sounds like a big queen
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dajee93


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hearmeroar wrotes:
Wait, I am confused. In chapter 1 you said you had your own aparment. In this chapter you say you went up stairs to your room as if you are living with Kimmy. Please explain.
I could explain if I knew what chapter your on, remember in chapter 1 Xavier is telling Romero how he fucked Mrs Parker after he did something with Kimmy in her mom's house,he never lived with Kimmy. So you'll have to tell me what chapter your reading.
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Post Posted: 14 days ago
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southernsteel


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Ok you put on some smooth moves... yeah the cheap one was a good idea with so many crazy folks out and about.
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Post Posted: 16 days ago
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your-ex


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That was sweet
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Post Posted: 16 days ago
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yourpantsonfire


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Getting her a cheaper ring for work is a genius idea!
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Post Posted: 18 days ago
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hearmeroar


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This is not a true story. All stories in this section are to be non-fiction. Your story is so sensationalized that I stop reading it when the 3rd guy came into the picture. Also, I find it hard to believe that you are black. No real black man will use the word "cock" to describe dick. Gaythugay get the fuck outta here man. You're a fake.
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Post Posted: 18 days ago
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hearmeroar


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Boooo. Get off the stage.
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Post Posted: 20 days ago
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dajee93


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Wow someone gave a thumbs down on chapter 24,about innocent people getting robbed and shot up,but that's okay in the next chapter you'll see whose behind all of this.
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Post Posted: 21 days ago
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puzziboi


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i'm intrigued
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slidesdos2


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Post Posted: 22 days ago
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hearmeroar


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WOW!.. Can't predict where this is going but anxious to see.
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Post Posted: 23 days ago
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trannyluvrpoet


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Thanks!
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Post Posted: 24 days ago
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southernsteel


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You got pull and don't know it, even if you were dumb on the outside too. Praise Lynch because saved you them Jamaicans don't want to fuck with the leader of a rival's kid. RELAX!!!!!
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Post Posted: 24 days ago
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southernsteel


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Now you done did it. You turned loose that young energizer bunny on her puzzy. Now the lil disrespectful Mother FICKEE is sprung on the goodness. One day the world will learn that both pussy and puzzy are drugs tto be handled with. BOOM DYNAMITE WILL FUCK YOU UP!!!!! LOL
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Post Posted: 24 days ago
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ricogap


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Hopefully all chapters are added on here...
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Post Posted: 24 days ago
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darkartist12


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I think Lynch got a tiny crush,lol.

I be damned if i get raped and then to add insult to injury by being called a snitch.

Daddy Deathrow aint so innocent i see,and hubby prob was in on it too,lmao!

Nice chapter! In love with the story already,it's juicy.
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Post Posted: 25 days ago
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bigthang1992


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Yes keep it Up
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puzziboi


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chakatan_333 wrotes:
Oh my goodness, smgdh...lmao
isn't the main character a mess??? i wonder should i explore his personality some more.
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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chakatan_333


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That was touching, it didn't involve a lot of sex, it told a touching story of the early days of being gay and on the downlow, and how shit that happen in the dark comes to the light.
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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southernsteel


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What a touching story... only if we could truly live our lives unbothered. It will never happen though especially in the black community. You know poverty is a dangerous animal among us. So many of us are so poor and the only excitement they can afford is being nosey along with the drama it brings.
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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yungblknerd


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Are you going to continue the story? Or are you done with this? It was getting pretty good.
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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southernsteel


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There might be a murder in the house today... Wilk has gave up some dick Royal... dick is a drug can separate pussy from puzzy. Both pack dynamite!!!!!
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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stevie_2k15


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https://my.w.tt/xzI2edQPXS

So click the link for a good read.
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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puzziboi


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interesting...
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Post Posted: 26 days ago
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wetland


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Moreee
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Post Posted: 28 days ago
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southern_virgo


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dajee93 wrotes:
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That was nice! Forgiveness is in the spirit of Christmas!!!
Yes it is, its been awhile since I've gotten a comment from you,Merry Christmas
Dude...BGC was tripping for a while and I couldn't log on. I thought the site just shut down...LOL. I just got back on a couple days ago. Glad to see y'all still going hard in the stories section.
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Post Posted: 29 days ago
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dajee93


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southern_virgo wrotes:
That was nice! Forgiveness is in the spirit of Christmas!!!
Yes it is, its been awhile since I've gotten a comment from you,Merry Christmas
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Post Posted: 29 days ago
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dajee93


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I'm glad Ricardo and his father is moving on but there was a phone call made when the baby was born I feel some type of way about this shit, something ain't right I smell a dead rat somewhere.
Ricardo's dad just paid the doctor to make sure the baby was okay he didn't know about the twins until the baby died,no worry's dad didn't do anything to the baby.
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Post Posted: 29 days ago
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southernsteel


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this is what now and into the future that hold the black community back. We worry about everyone's business while ignoring our own. Not a good formula to succeed in life.
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Post Posted: 2018-12-21 00:58:13
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wetland


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Yasss
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Post Posted: 2018-12-20 23:38:09
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ready2beluvd


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damn my p***y got wet
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Post Posted: 2018-12-20 07:57:29
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southernsteel


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Damn, let Tyrone ass have the house and get the hell out or there. LOL
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Post Posted: 2018-12-20 00:35:10
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wetland


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Yassss
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Post Posted: 2018-12-19 19:59:52
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sirol316


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I need more of this story
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Post Posted: 2018-12-18 20:47:11
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redd_dawn


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OMG!!! This was one of my favorite stories!!! I'm glad it's back
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Post Posted: 2018-12-16 10:30:27
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best0


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What’s next
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Post Posted: 2018-12-15 18:11:19
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dajee93


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Jeff did fight back,and it wasn't written that bottoms were weak
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Post Posted: 2018-12-11 00:55:24
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