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your-ex


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Wish Erick Got At Least Some Revenge On Lamont... Unless Banging His HS Bully WAS The Revenge He Wanted
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your-ex


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And They Lived Happily Ever After
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your-ex


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LOL Something Just Like This Happened To Me
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your-ex


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WTFH, Uncle Al Is A Fuckin Creep, He Gets Rejected, And Now Since His Feelings Got Hurt He Goes Out Of His Way And Has Bry-Bry Kicked Out Her Home, Then On Top Of That The Second Her First Love Dionte’ Died This Slimy Bastard Shows Up At Her Door Drunk As Shit Wantin Some Ass... This Nigga Couldn't Wait, I Mean Give Her Some Time To Grieve…. Fuck.

Hot Story BTW The Character Uncle Al Just Triggered Me
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johnald1983


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More please
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wetland


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Omg more......
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glamorouslyfe


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Nice
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chakatan_333


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I'm already on the case lets read, I already have 2 good theories about the deaths.
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acmoon31


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shacas78 wrotes:
this is some f***k up s***t am not reading anymore this is ridiculous and cross the line f***k off with that crap
Ok lil bitch get off my shit and don't read it then...fuck you mean....shrimp dick lil head ass nigga
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riyadhchange


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razza8


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I will try it’s hard I got a lot going on!!
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brothablack


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DAMN...MO mah nigga
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shacas78


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this is some f***k up s***t am not reading anymore this is ridiculous and cross the line f***k off with that crap
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Okay...call me a hypocrite because we know that I'm the first to say "beat his ass" when someone NEEDS their ass beat, but I just think it's the wrong message to send to a little girl that it's alright for a man to beat and rape his mate and then cheer him on about it. Now yes, Jax was being a bit over-the-top but I know there was a better way to correct him than beating and raping him (and, say what you want, it was rape)! It left me feeling uneasy after I read it, even though I'm aware that it is fiction. And, I say again, what kind of message is that sending to his daughter? I mean the author could have had Brando read Jax for filth for his behavior as of late, or something, instead of taking that kind of action against him. Just my opinion.
I think you should read that chapter again, and there's nothing saying its alright for a man to put his hand on anyone,and Jax isn't the type you just talk too if you read anything about him,read the chapter again.
I've read quite enough of the chapter and I've said what I said. Not saying that you aren't a great writer as I am immensely enjoying the story. Again, your story and my opinion. Write on!
That's fine, the chapter has been revised that's why I asked you to reread it,I read the chapter and thought it was too much before I read you comment,but thank's for reading anyway sir.
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glamorouslyfe


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U did it again👐
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dajee93 wrotes:
southern_virgo wrotes:
Okay...call me a hypocrite because we know that I'm the first to say "beat his ass" when someone NEEDS their ass beat, but I just think it's the wrong message to send to a little girl that it's alright for a man to beat and rape his mate and then cheer him on about it. Now yes, Jax was being a bit over-the-top but I know there was a better way to correct him than beating and raping him (and, say what you want, it was rape)! It left me feeling uneasy after I read it, even though I'm aware that it is fiction. And, I say again, what kind of message is that sending to his daughter? I mean the author could have had Brando read Jax for filth for his behavior as of late, or something, instead of taking that kind of action against him. Just my opinion.
I think you should read that chapter again, and there's nothing saying its alright for a man to put his hand on anyone,and Jax isn't the type you just talk too if you read anything about him,read the chapter again.
I've read quite enough of the chapter and I've said what I said. Not saying that you aren't a great writer as I am immensely enjoying the story. Again, your story and my opinion. Write on!
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papi-xxx


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All because you a hoe
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dajee93


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southern_virgo wrotes:
Okay...call me a hypocrite because we know that I'm the first to say "beat his ass" when someone NEEDS their ass beat, but I just think it's the wrong message to send to a little girl that it's alright for a man to beat and rape his mate and then cheer him on about it. Now yes, Jax was being a bit over-the-top but I know there was a better way to correct him than beating and raping him (and, say what you want, it was rape)! It left me feeling uneasy after I read it, even though I'm aware that it is fiction. And, I say again, what kind of message is that sending to his daughter? I mean the author could have had Brando read Jax for filth for his behavior as of late, or something, instead of taking that kind of action against him. Just my opinion.
I think you should read that chapter again, and there's nothing saying its alright for a man to put his hand on anyone,and Jax isn't the type you just talk too if you read anything about him,read the chapter again.
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razza8


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Ahhhh my dick on brick
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razza8


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Ahhhh my dick on brick
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glamorouslyfe


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More
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acmoon31


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Thanks for reading bro I appreciate it
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dajee93


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I was about to suggest spacing it out,but you already know it makes it hard to read, but it will be better I've been there, a very different story that's for sure.

I was thinking maybe he was just thinking all of what happened. I'll be reading chapter two for sure,
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acmoon31


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Next time Ill space it out. I didn't think it was gonna post like this.
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razza8


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Steel seem like you hip to the game..If so keep to yo self lol shit real
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glamorouslyfe


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Hot
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glamorouslyfe


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More
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kayden18


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nice story so far
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imcute


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U doing another chapters
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southernsteel


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Here we another notch carved on the new to puzzy crew...let that drug mellow deep within your mind and hold it in!!!!!!!
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glamorouslyfe


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Hot😁
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imcute


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Go on wattpad put your stories on there
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ucaneatallofme


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So long man...deuces!
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puzziboi


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please give us more...please!!!
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southernsteel


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Safe journey with the wind to your back....
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southernsteel


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hmm
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southernsteel


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Fuck what they think... live your life for you!!!!!
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hearmeroar


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Please use punctuations symbols like periods, commons, question marks. It was very confusing reading your writing.
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hearmeroar


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Oh yes. You and Usher will be getting married. I bet you I can guess what he will buy you for your wedding gift - A life long heaping dose of herpes. They will be all over your lips and you bootyhole. Be glad young man it was only a dream. If not, you would be disease infected.
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ts_flowers


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southernsteel wrotes:
Well all I can say is give the lions some puzzy now. They saved you...ask Exo.
Lol im tryna see if i wanna make this a longer piece on here
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bigthang1992


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Why do u keep reposting the same stories
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southernsteel


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Well all I can say is give the lions some puzzy now. They saved you...ask Exo.
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bustbaby1994


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I definitely want to read them
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hearmeroar


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Your encounders with a married man. It must be a true story.
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hearmeroar


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Sick
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brothablack


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U think he hot? U want his dyck...or his ass? Then do it...keep igt in da family. You a freak? Then do it. Yo sister don't ever have ta know.
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southernsteel


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Retired puzzy has that umpf factor about it.
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southernsteel


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Although I don't like the master Vs slave angle... sound like that was some good puzzi.
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southernsteel


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Only you can decide that. Will you have a guilt trip afterwards?
 
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